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August 30, 2005, 9:42PM
mudbloon84

Subj: after-work poem

finally back from sick leave and have a little juice left in me. subject might be a bit misleading this isnt my poem, but one i heard recently. author wrote it when he was 12 lol. but i still think its worth writing down.

People say I have my mother’s face
But only half my mother’s body
I lie down, half baked with no name
My shoes on my bed
I’m a ruddy duckling
Raised around white swans
Empty myself and place in the sink
Ready to be cleaned
Ready for the flood
Maybe the only way is to try again
Try all over again
Time for soccer practice.

To be frank the ending could use some work. but i think there’s something special here.

August 31, 2005, 11:11AM
babyrube

You're so embarrassing.

August 31, 2005, 10:51PM
mudbloon84

but don't you feel better?


October 5, 2005, 11:01PM
mudbloon84

Subj: i miss my friend

i miss him.

August 31, 2005, 11:11AM
babyrube

Would it feel better if I talked to you like this?